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Friday, November 30, 2007
Student Portrait Assignment, Preliminary Critique Five
Lindsey, Portrait
What are your thoughts when you look at this image? What emotions does this photograph evoke?
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clearly, this girl is very relaxed; shes laying on her bed and just kickin back. its hard to say whether shes on her laptop talking to friends or surfing the web, or if shes doing something school related, like typing a paper, or doing research for something.
She seems to be very relaxed, but just looking at how she is sitting down and what not, but then when you look at her facial expression, she looks like she just read something on the computer that might upset her a little.
my thoughts about this image is about a hard-working and possibly busy woman. Its like her environment is relaxed and calm while as maybe internally she has a lot going on. emotions:calm,relaxed,tense.
She looks completely comfortable. She's lying back surfing the web to see what's new. She looks like she's having a blast. She's zoned into her computer. She's probably reading something that's keeping her attention and it would take a great deal to distract her from what she's reading.
It looks like the girl is stairing at a blank screen or is seeing something on the screen that bores her, or depresses her. It must be a myspace issue or something. That's why I dont go near myspace. Look what it did to her.
She looks really concentrated with what she is doing. She looks sort of flustered, which leads me to believe she's using photoshop. (It likes to be slow for no apparent reason.) Photoshop hates me.
the girl in this image looks really calm. this image makes me think of technology and computers. it looks like an ad in a magazine to buy a new laptop or something
Lindsey, Portrait
12 comments:
clearly, this girl is very relaxed; shes laying on her bed and just kickin back. its hard to say whether shes on her laptop talking to friends or surfing the web, or if shes doing something school related, like typing a paper, or doing research for something.
She seems to be very relaxed, but just looking at how she is sitting down and what not, but then when you look at her facial expression, she looks like she just read something on the computer that might upset her a little.
my thoughts about this image is about a hard-working and possibly busy woman. Its like her environment is relaxed and calm while as maybe internally she has a lot going on.
emotions:calm,relaxed,tense.
She looks like she is doing h/w or doing her work.She is probably doing work instead or socializing because she doesn't look that relaxed.
The subject is doing work of some sort, relaying a feeling of concentration. While composition is good, print quality could be improved.
The girl seems really into what she is doing on the computer and seems like she really needs to get this done and feels that no one can ditract her.
She looks completely comfortable. She's lying back surfing the web to see what's new. She looks like she's having a blast. She's zoned into her computer. She's probably reading something that's keeping her attention and it would take a great deal to distract her from what she's reading.
It looks like the girl is stairing at a blank screen or is seeing something on the screen that bores her, or depresses her. It must be a myspace issue or something. That's why I dont go near myspace. Look what it did to her.
She looks really concentrated with what she is doing. She looks sort of flustered, which leads me to believe she's using photoshop. (It likes to be slow for no apparent reason.) Photoshop hates me.
the girl seems to be comfortable but i feel that she is nervous, i dont know why i think that though,
shes prbobably on myspace
kris looks like shes studying hard, like shes got a paper due or something and shes doing it at the last minute.
the girl in this image looks really calm. this image makes me think of technology and computers. it looks like an ad in a magazine to buy a new laptop or something
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